Single Scene, Emotional Death Scene From Take Me Home

Hi guys, welcome back to Big Blog Theory, hope you’re all doing well. What you’re about to read is a scene that I wrote. In this scene, there’s a boy called Jamie and he falls severly ill and he perishes / dies during the night where he’s surrounded by his friends . I think it’s really sad and emotional because no one was expecting this, they didn’t see it coming . I hope you like it, I’ll upload it down below so that you can read it .

{ It’s 10 pm, everyone’s getting ready to go to bed} { Jamie is feeling really nautious and he doesn’t really know where he is, he’s just having a little walk around the house}

{ David walks past Jamie}

David} You alright, Jamie ?. { Jamie suddenly collapses and kneels down in front of him} ” Oh my god, Jamie !!!!.  Oh shit . Michael !!!!!, come quick !! . ” Are you alright, Jamie ?, what happened, what happened ?, tell me, tell me .

{ Jamie starts shaking and freaking out}

Jamie} I think I’m dying, David, I think I’m dying . David, is this the end ?, it’s the end, isn’t it ?.

David} No no no, it’s not, it’s definetely not the end .

Jamie} I can’t feel my legs, I can’t feel my legs, I’m dying, David .

David} No no, you’re not dying, Jamie. We’re gonna get you some help, it’s gonna be okay, it’s gonna be fine .

Jamie} I can’t see anything, I can’t feel anything. { He freaks out}

David} It’s gonna be ok, Jamie, just hold on, just hold on a little bit longer. { He shouts for his friends to come and help him} ” Michael, Johnny, call an ambulance, quick !!! ”. { David rocks Jamie back and forth} ” Jamie, are you there ?, can you hear me ?.

Jamie starts crying out in pain}

David} It’s alright, Jamie, it’s alright, everything’s gonna be alright, you’re gonna be just fine .

Jamie} David, something’s happening, my heart’s stopping, my body’s shutting down, I’m dying, it’s time . Ehhhhh, I don’t wanna die, I don’t wanna die yet, I’m not ready . { He cries}

David} Jamie, don’t do this to me. Don’t leave me now .

Jamie} Look out for Michael and Johnny, alright ?. This is gonna be the last time they’re ever gonna see me .

David} Of course, of course .

Jamie} Tell them I’m on my way, tell them I’m coming home, I’m coming home. Ehhhh, I’m scared, I’m scared, David .

David} You’re gonna be ok, Jamie, just stay with me, stay with me . { He starts crying} ” Johnny help !!!! ”.

{ Michael runs in and see’s what’s going on}

Michael} Jamie, oh my god, my boy, my poor boy . { David’s mum walks in and David falls into her arms}

Jessica} It’s ok, it’s ok, it’s alright . It’s all over now . { She comforts her son}

Johnny} Jamie, Jamie, hang in there, everything’s gonna alright .

{ It shows a little flash back where Jamie is in heaven and he’s aroused by a golden sunset, which is Jamie’s idealisation of heaven}

Jamie gasps}

Jamie} I’m here, I’m finally here. { He finds his mum in the afterlife, who’s standing right there} ” Mum !!!, mum !!!, I’m over here .

His mum} Awww, my baby, there you are, I’ve been missing you so much .

Jamie} Mum, I’ve done so much, I’ve got so much to tell you .

Mum} Aw, my little adventurer, I love you so much.

Jamie} I love you too, mum . { He hugs her really tightly}

His mum} I’m so glad you’re back, you promise me you won’t leave me like that ever again ?.

Jamie} I won’t, mum, I promise. { He starts crying}

His mum} What’s wrong, Jamie ?.

Jamie} I’m ok, it’s just, it’s so hard out there, mum, it’s really hard. I can’t, I just miss you so much, I don’t want to go out there on my own .

His mum} Just hang in there, Jamie, you’re doing alright . We’re rooting for you. Me and your dad, we both love you so very much, we’re so proud of far you’ve come . Keep going . You’re doing good, love. Alright, Jamie ?.

Jamie} Ok, mum, thank you, thank you . I think it’s time, I’m coming home . { He holds his mum’s hand and they both disappear into the bright sunlight, Jamie’s time is up, then it shows him lying in David’s arms with his eyes closed and just dazing into the ceiling}

Michael breaks down}

Michael} No no no no no no, Jamie !!!! .

Johnny} Jamie, man, where did he go ?.

David} He’s gone home, he’s gone home . { They all just sit there, accompanied by his dead body}

End of scene}